AUDIENCE FEEDBACK: Narrative Rushes + Performance Rough Cut

Narrative rushes:
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Feedback:

• realistic
• Worked for the audience
• some shots were blurry
• didnt really make sense with graveyard
• liked the table scene although lighting was bad
• good continuity
• shot of TV was shaky 
• lighting was different for different shots
• last take at the end was too long and shaky 
• story makes little sense

Performance rough cut:
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Feedback:

• sometimes takes were too long 
• costume was realistic
• facepaint was weird
• different shots had different lighting 
• more enthusiasm for bassist
• ELS was cool when they switched postition
• costumes were good
• singer's singing was convincing
• liked the overlaying of the singer on top of the drumming
• some shots of the guitar solo was a bit off
• some syncing of singing shots were off

SHOOT 6: Narrative

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SHOOT 4: Performance Re - Take

PLANNING/PREP

Call Sheets
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Shot list 
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Location
Underground Parking lot:

• Middle of empty parking lot
• Have band car in being used

Costumes

Isabel Influence

• Isabel (keyboard)
•  Black skirt
• Turtle neck stripped shirt
• ripped tights
• Red lip stick
• Simon (lead singer)
• All black suit (black shirt + jacket + trousers)
• Dress shoes
• Large belt buckle
• Hugo (Bass)
• Distressed light blue jeans
• Black button up shirt
• Thin leather bracelets
• Rubber bands
• Festival passes
• Biker boots
• Sam (Drums)
• Converse / vans (black and white)
• Tattoo sleeves (sleeve + sharpie)
• Oversized shirt (black)
• Distressed black jeans
• Combats
• Hannah (Guitar)
• Leather jacket
• Low cut crop top 
• Black jeans / combat trousers
• Purple lipstick 
• Black eye-liner
• Choker / neck strap 

Props

• Guitar
• Bass
• Drumkit + drumsticks
• Snare
• Bass drum
• Top drums
• Crash symbol x2
• 2 Amps
• 2 Leads
• Mic + Microphone stand
• Car to unpack all equipment

REFLECTION

Directing:

Cinematography: 

SHOOT 2: Narrative Christmas Market

PLANNING/PREP

Call Sheets
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Shot list 
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Location
Christmas market:

• Churros Stand
• Kiss in front of sign
• Tree decoration time jump
• Bench time jump
• Walk around the market

Costumes
Man:

• Winter jacket
• Backpack
• Black jeans
• No hat 
• Dark jeans

Man (2nd costume):

• Grey shirt
• Hat on head
• No jacket
• dark jeans

Woman:

• Pink Beanie/ Hat
• White handbag
• Checkered scarf
• Beige winter coat 
• Eyeliner makeup

Props

• Churros from Christmas market 

RUSHES/REFLECTION

Rushes
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Above is an idea of what this scene/shoot will look like in the music video. There will be many more effects and editing will be done more carefully to ensure verisimilitude in post production.
Directing 
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Above is footage of Chris and Simon directing the scene where the couple is on the bench.

Costume change
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Above is footage of set dressing where the central protagonist is changing clothes to reflect a different time period.